I think DOA’s story need a reboot. The DOA cast is pretty big now and some of them could play a bigger part in the story. Kokoro could’ve been more involved with DOATEC and M.I.S.T.
For example: Ayane, kills Miyako in order to take down M.I.S.T./DOATEC. Kokoro finding out that her mother got killed, makes her go crazy and goes a man hunt to find out who killed her mother. Only to find out Ayane did, Kokoro then takes over DOATEC Japan and convinces Helena to join Kokoro in hunting down and killing the ninja’s and Donovan. Helena then orders Marie rose (Who met Honoka already) to go after the ninja’s. Honoka finds out about this mission of Marie and joins her to find and kill the ninja’s. They follow the tracks, but end up in M.I.S.T.’s lab.
Meanwhile NiCO’s who’s doing her experiments in order to revive Raidou, is working together with Christie. Donovan then messages Christie and commands her to retrieve Honoka alive to give to NiCO so she can conduct her experiments and continue her research to revive Raidou. Christie then knocks out Marie and Honoka and kidnaps Honoka. After Christie kidnapped Honoka and handed her over to NiCO. Donovan orders Christie to reactivate project epsilon on Rig. While Christie is on her way to Rig (who’s watching the DOA6 tournament). Bayman is on his way to M.I.S.T.’s lab because he haven’t heard anything from Marie, he then finds her knocked out and wakes her up, only to hear that Christie kidnapped Honoka and brought her to NiCO. Marie begs Bayman to help her save Honoka first before going after Donovan. Bayman reluctantly agrees to help her save Honoka and they’re on their way to the lab. Bayman and Honoka then get confronted by NiCO, Rig and Christie. NiCO tells Bayman and Marie that they’re too late and that experiment was a success. Then Nico proceeds to fight against Marie, only for Nico to lose the fight. Meanwhile Bayman fights both Christie and Rig at the same time and wins against the both of them. NiCO then releases Honoka and wake Raidou up. Raidou, wakes up angry and fights NiCO, Christie, Bayman, Rig, Marie and Honoka. He knocks all of them down except Honoka. During the fight with Honoka he recognises the energy they both possess and then remembers that Honoka is his daughter and Tells her that she is his daughter. Honoka is shocked, but becomes very emotional because she loves him. Even though Raidou is a power hungry brute, he somehow feels for Honoka and recognises her as his daughter.
Raidou, who still seeks revenge at the Mugen Tenshin village, is escaping the lab with Honoka and the both of them go on their way to the Mugen tenshin village to get revenge on the clan. When Raidou arrives with Honoka at the village, they fight the entire village. Then there’s a showdown between Honoka and Ayane and Raidou and Hayate. Ayane and Honoka fight, during the fight Ayane recognises the energy Honoka and Raidou posess and asks Honoka who she is. Honoka then says that she is Raidou’s daughter and that she’s here with him to get revenge on the clan for banning Raidou. Ayane then confesses that she is also Raidou’s daughter and Honoka is surprised to find out.
Meanwhile Hayate fights with Raidou and Hayate loses again to Raidou. After Raidou badly defeated Hayate he is on his way to Honoka and Ayane and wants to fight Ayane, he then finds out that Honoka has teamed up with Ayane and the both of them fight Raidou. At first Raidou has the upper hand and badly injures Ayane, Honoka then becomes very angry and copies the torn sky blast tecnique and fights Raidou.
Just before Ayane got knocked out she sends out butterflies to Kasumi and Hayabusa. Meanwhile Hayabusa and Kasumi are fighting Kokoro and Helena who were hunting them down for Killing Miyako. It’s a close fight where Kokoro and Helena both get knocked out but not killed. Hayabusa and Kasumi then receive the butterflies from Ayane and are headed to the Mugen Tenshin village. During their journey to the village, they come across Nyotengu, who wants to test the strength of the man who killed bankotsubo. Hayabusa is victorious and tells Nyotengu to leave. After the fight Kasumi and Hayabusa continue their journey to the village. Not knowing Phase 4 was ordered to follow them and get more data from the clan and to kill Kasumi. Kasumi and Hayabusa reach the village and find Hayate and Ayane both knocked out. They also see a unknown girl fighting Raidou. Raidou gains the upper hand in the fight vs Honoka and knocks her out. After the fight Raidou then turns his back to see Kasumi and Hayabusa. Filled with rage remembering that they killed him before makes Raidou go on a rampage. Raidou then gets assistance from Phase 4 who fights Kasumi. Hayabusa then faces off vs Raidou. Kasumi and Hayabusa both lose the fight and just when Phase 4 and Raidou are about to Kill them, Ayame and Shiden appear and fight Phase 4 and Raidou. During that fight the 4 ninja’s wake up and see that Ayame and Shiden are slain by Phase 4 and Raidou. Kasumi, Ayane, and Hayate go berserk and kill Raidou and Phase 4. They swore that they’ll get revenge at DOATEC and M.I.S.T. after that Honoka wakes up and runs to Ayane. The ninja’s get acquainted with Honoka and are interested in her powers. Honoka swears loyalty to the ninja’s and they teach Honoka their techniques.
Meanwhile NiCO, Christie and Rig regain consciousness and capture Bayman and Marie rose. Bayman and Marie rose the get saved by Lisa, who entered the Lab for her own personal reasons. Bayman then confronts Christie and after the fight, the both of them team up against Donovan and Rig, ending up killing them both. Lisa fights NiCO and is victorious. She then Steals the data NiCO collected and uses it for her own goals.
Meanwhile both Kokoro and Helena wake up from the fight and Marie and Lisa approached them. Lisa who stole the data from NiCO gives the data to Helena and Kokoro, meanwhile Marie tells them what happened. Kokoro and Helena order Lisa to make a weapon to kill the ninja’s with the data she stole from NiCO.
After Donovan and Rig getting killed by Bayman and Christie, Bayman and Christie become partners and both of them return to DOATEC and meet up there with Kokoro, Helena, Marie and Lisa.
Meanwhile the 6th tournament is Held and Leifang wins the tournament (because she deserves it).
For DOA7 it’s about the showdown between the Ninja’s and Honoka and Between team DOATEC.
Tbh I’m proud of my writing even though my reboot story has a lot of plot holes I feel like.
For example: Ayane, kills Miyako in order to take down M.I.S.T./DOATEC. Kokoro finding out that her mother got killed, makes her go crazy and goes a man hunt to find out who killed her mother. Only to find out Ayane did, Kokoro then takes over DOATEC Japan and convinces Helena to join Kokoro in hunting down and killing the ninja’s and Donovan. Helena then orders Marie rose (Who met Honoka already) to go after the ninja’s. Honoka finds out about this mission of Marie and joins her to find and kill the ninja’s. They follow the tracks, but end up in M.I.S.T.’s lab.
Meanwhile NiCO’s who’s doing her experiments in order to revive Raidou, is working together with Christie. Donovan then messages Christie and commands her to retrieve Honoka alive to give to NiCO so she can conduct her experiments and continue her research to revive Raidou. Christie then knocks out Marie and Honoka and kidnaps Honoka. After Christie kidnapped Honoka and handed her over to NiCO. Donovan orders Christie to reactivate project epsilon on Rig. While Christie is on her way to Rig (who’s watching the DOA6 tournament). Bayman is on his way to M.I.S.T.’s lab because he haven’t heard anything from Marie, he then finds her knocked out and wakes her up, only to hear that Christie kidnapped Honoka and brought her to NiCO. Marie begs Bayman to help her save Honoka first before going after Donovan. Bayman reluctantly agrees to help her save Honoka and they’re on their way to the lab. Bayman and Honoka then get confronted by NiCO, Rig and Christie. NiCO tells Bayman and Marie that they’re too late and that experiment was a success. Then Nico proceeds to fight against Marie, only for Nico to lose the fight. Meanwhile Bayman fights both Christie and Rig at the same time and wins against the both of them. NiCO then releases Honoka and wake Raidou up. Raidou, wakes up angry and fights NiCO, Christie, Bayman, Rig, Marie and Honoka. He knocks all of them down except Honoka. During the fight with Honoka he recognises the energy they both possess and then remembers that Honoka is his daughter and Tells her that she is his daughter. Honoka is shocked, but becomes very emotional because she loves him. Even though Raidou is a power hungry brute, he somehow feels for Honoka and recognises her as his daughter.
Raidou, who still seeks revenge at the Mugen Tenshin village, is escaping the lab with Honoka and the both of them go on their way to the Mugen tenshin village to get revenge on the clan. When Raidou arrives with Honoka at the village, they fight the entire village. Then there’s a showdown between Honoka and Ayane and Raidou and Hayate. Ayane and Honoka fight, during the fight Ayane recognises the energy Honoka and Raidou posess and asks Honoka who she is. Honoka then says that she is Raidou’s daughter and that she’s here with him to get revenge on the clan for banning Raidou. Ayane then confesses that she is also Raidou’s daughter and Honoka is surprised to find out.
Meanwhile Hayate fights with Raidou and Hayate loses again to Raidou. After Raidou badly defeated Hayate he is on his way to Honoka and Ayane and wants to fight Ayane, he then finds out that Honoka has teamed up with Ayane and the both of them fight Raidou. At first Raidou has the upper hand and badly injures Ayane, Honoka then becomes very angry and copies the torn sky blast tecnique and fights Raidou.
Just before Ayane got knocked out she sends out butterflies to Kasumi and Hayabusa. Meanwhile Hayabusa and Kasumi are fighting Kokoro and Helena who were hunting them down for Killing Miyako. It’s a close fight where Kokoro and Helena both get knocked out but not killed. Hayabusa and Kasumi then receive the butterflies from Ayane and are headed to the Mugen Tenshin village. During their journey to the village, they come across Nyotengu, who wants to test the strength of the man who killed bankotsubo. Hayabusa is victorious and tells Nyotengu to leave. After the fight Kasumi and Hayabusa continue their journey to the village. Not knowing Phase 4 was ordered to follow them and get more data from the clan and to kill Kasumi. Kasumi and Hayabusa reach the village and find Hayate and Ayane both knocked out. They also see a unknown girl fighting Raidou. Raidou gains the upper hand in the fight vs Honoka and knocks her out. After the fight Raidou then turns his back to see Kasumi and Hayabusa. Filled with rage remembering that they killed him before makes Raidou go on a rampage. Raidou then gets assistance from Phase 4 who fights Kasumi. Hayabusa then faces off vs Raidou. Kasumi and Hayabusa both lose the fight and just when Phase 4 and Raidou are about to Kill them, Ayame and Shiden appear and fight Phase 4 and Raidou. During that fight the 4 ninja’s wake up and see that Ayame and Shiden are slain by Phase 4 and Raidou. Kasumi, Ayane, and Hayate go berserk and kill Raidou and Phase 4. They swore that they’ll get revenge at DOATEC and M.I.S.T. after that Honoka wakes up and runs to Ayane. The ninja’s get acquainted with Honoka and are interested in her powers. Honoka swears loyalty to the ninja’s and they teach Honoka their techniques.
Meanwhile NiCO, Christie and Rig regain consciousness and capture Bayman and Marie rose. Bayman and Marie rose the get saved by Lisa, who entered the Lab for her own personal reasons. Bayman then confronts Christie and after the fight, the both of them team up against Donovan and Rig, ending up killing them both. Lisa fights NiCO and is victorious. She then Steals the data NiCO collected and uses it for her own goals.
Meanwhile both Kokoro and Helena wake up from the fight and Marie and Lisa approached them. Lisa who stole the data from NiCO gives the data to Helena and Kokoro, meanwhile Marie tells them what happened. Kokoro and Helena order Lisa to make a weapon to kill the ninja’s with the data she stole from NiCO.
After Donovan and Rig getting killed by Bayman and Christie, Bayman and Christie become partners and both of them return to DOATEC and meet up there with Kokoro, Helena, Marie and Lisa.
Meanwhile the 6th tournament is Held and Leifang wins the tournament (because she deserves it).
For DOA7 it’s about the showdown between the Ninja’s and Honoka and Between team DOATEC.
Tbh I’m proud of my writing even though my reboot story has a lot of plot holes I feel like.
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