I noticed that on playback. Not gonna take it down. It IS a pilot episode after all. But, check out the 9 minute mark if nothing else. I have some choice words for TN. Gonna upload a video in a few to test the headset with the mic.
Watched it. Overall, most of the stuff you said makes sense and I agree with. I even chuckled a couple of times I have to admit. Oh man, those maxdrago references... xD
However, your way of saying things has a very 'cool-and-edgy-teenager' vibe who is expressing his feelings. Some people will just bash you because of that. Not that you should care, since you're just taking stuff off your chest. Then, again maybe you could try being a little more classy in the next episode. Just a little.