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Candy Dragon

Candy Dragon

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@Vigoorian King yes, yes it is. I tried last time and got my ass kicked when that armoured Rachel design came out of nowhere. So I've been working on this design since rumours of the competition came up. I'll let it out of hiding later on :p
 
WisperG

WisperG

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Thanks for the feedback, everyone! I'm thinking I'll just have to draw both outfits and see which one turns out better ;)

Here's a prelim sketch with the C2/corrupted look:
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This is pretty much the same spike placement of the outfit from DOA2. I added a few extra ones, but I feel like I need to change up the pattern a bit more. I don't want it to seem like I'm just copy/pasting Tengu's existing costume :eek:

Not sure what to do about her top. I considered a skeletal/spike bikini top (that you can see on the right), but it didn't turn out so good. Dunno if I'll try to rework it. I'm open to suggestions :confused:

Since TN seems to put a lot more effort into giving her a nice butt than they did for the other girls, I thought about reworking the poofy pants to be tighter/smaller to show off her figure more, but after sitting on it for awhile I think I really like the pants as-is. It's certainly different than any other outfits she has at the moment, which I think it a good thing.
 
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Naked on Mondays

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My costume is now done and submitted. I want to thank everyone that offered up an opinion on how to make it better.

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I just hope this time you get one vote per character and not a set number of votes among everyone. Either way I will be surprised if I get more that 0 votes since I won't vote for myself.
 
David Gregg

David Gregg

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WisperG said:
Thanks for the feedback, everyone! I'm thinking I'll just have to draw both outfits and see which one turns out better ;)

Here's a prelim sketch with the C2/corrupted look:
20140628_1939101_zps3c9bcdd3.jpg


This is pretty much the same spike placement of the outfit from DOA2. I added a few extra ones, but I feel like I need to change up the pattern a bit more. I don't want it to seem like I'm just copy/pasting Tengu's existing costume :eek:

Not sure what to do about her top. I considered a skeletal/spike bikini top (that you can see on the right), but it didn't turn out so good. Dunno if I'll try to rework it. I'm open to suggestions :confused:

Since TN seems to put a lot more effort into giving her a nice butt than they did for the other girls, I thought about reworking the poofy pants to be tighter/smaller to show off her figure more, but after sitting on it for awhile I think I really like the pants as-is. It's certainly different than any other outfits she has at the moment, which I think it a good thing.
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What you could do is have 2 additional spikes come up from below the chest and conveniently cover up the candy stores (since Tengu was shirtless with that outfit). I would also tighten the pants or turn the bottom into something new while keeping the same color scheme. It should resemble the original C2 but it needs to be different otherwise you'll be breaking their rule "It must be an original design".
 
David Gregg

David Gregg

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Naked on Mondays said:
My costume is now done and submitted. I want to thank everyone that offered up an opinion on how to make it better.

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I just hope this time you get one vote per character and not a set number of votes among everyone. Either way I will be surprised if I get more that 0 votes since I won't vote for myself.
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No offense but the constant mention of DOA for PC hurts your design. I wouldn't have put all of that text in there. :/
 
Forlorn Penguin

Forlorn Penguin

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WisperG said:
Here's a prelim sketch with the C2/corrupted look:
20140628_1939101_zps3c9bcdd3.jpg


This is pretty much the same spike placement of the outfit from DOA2. I added a few extra ones, but I feel like I need to change up the pattern a bit more. I don't want it to seem like I'm just copy/pasting Tengu's existing costume :eek:
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Yeah, I'd mix it up a bit more, but I like were it's going. I think it'd have a nicer "corrupted" vibe if they weren't entirely symmetrical too. I know they aren't in your drawing, but if you add more, try giving them "crazier" placement and see how that looks.

WisperG said:
Not sure what to do about her top. I considered a skeletal/spike bikini top (that you can see on the right), but it didn't turn out so good. Dunno if I'll try to rework it. I'm open to suggestions :confused:
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Hmm. Maybe something like this, so it still looks shirtless, but doesn't expose anything.

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WisperG said:
Since TN seems to put a lot more effort into giving her a nice butt than they did for the other girls, I thought about reworking the poofy pants to be tighter/smaller to show off her figure more, but after sitting on it for awhile I think I really like the pants as-is. It's certainly different than any other outfits she has at the moment, which I think it a good thing.
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I agree. Showing off her ass isn't necessary. I like the poofy look.
 
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