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TOMA SAN

TOMA SAN

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Kiraragirl200 said:
First selfie with the badass ninja gf~ ♥
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For some reason I was just in the mood to draw something shippy XD This was a blast to color tho
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This is interesting, the intention to make their bodies close its cool, but i think you can adjust for an other version the intention, by exemple
- why dont show this right arms to the girl with cat shirt ?
maybe work more on the left arm of the girl blue shirt
- why using this composition i mean the using of portrait schema and not a landscape schema (in french we call this format paysage / format portrait)
- the mouth of violet girl can be more detailled by exemple showing teeth and skin color not only white
- we saw you have very good interest to draw eyes and hair because its the part you add a lot of details and shades / light
- if you look the other parts they seem less draw with some hesitation in the lineand treatment i think you need to work a bit on your understanding of clothes mecanism
- lines are really different in heads and body its a choice ?

I just give you my opinion its not the truth its just my view of your cool work and i try by these points to help you to level up ;)
 
Kiraragirl200

Kiraragirl200

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TOMA SAN said:
This is interesting, the intention to make their bodies close its cool, but i think you can adjust for an other version the intention, by exemple
- why dont show this right arms to the girl with cat shirt ?
maybe work more on the left arm of the girl blue shirt
- why using this composition i mean the using of portrait schema and not a landscape schema (in french we call this format paysage / format portrait)
- the mouth of violet girl can be more detailled by exemple showing teeth and skin color not only white
- we saw you have very good interest to draw eyes and hair because its the part you add a lot of details and shades / light
- if you look the other parts they seem less draw with some hesitation in the lineand treatment i think you need to work a bit on your understanding of clothes mecanism
- lines are really different in heads and body its a choice ?

I just give you my opinion its not the truth its just my view of your cool work and i try by these points to help you to level up ;)
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(Its supposed to be Kasumi and Hitomi btw XP)
I appreciate the critique, thank you :D (especially since I've been trying to draw more and get out of my comfort zone this year)
I'll definitely keep these in mind in my next pieces
 
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illninofan

illninofan

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KwonJigglypuff said:
Nice drawing. I'd love Marie to have a darker theme surrounding her, a more serious tone, rather than the cute funny devil aura she has.
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Same for Honoka while we're at it (since they team up in the game). I've often thought what she would look like with a more serious tone, rather than the bubbly, fun personality she displays.

If/when I learn how to draw, this could be an idea I can work toward.

For now, I'll sit back and enjoy the work in this thread. :)
 
Mayor-Of-Mustard

Mayor-Of-Mustard

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So Missy Tusara is doing an 'underswap' (look ik undertale is dead but idk how else to word it) kind of AU thing with DOA atm. She put the names of all the DOA characters in hats and the two names she pulled out have to swap outfits/personalities
The first two names she pulled out were Jann Lee and Nyotengu. This'll be... interesting?
 
Argentus

Argentus

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Tyaren said:
I love this, lol:

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by: https://twitter.com/sinjiko_uak
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all the new girls, nice!


Also, so hard to find any art of Mila that's not just shipping her with Tina, so i love this all the more.


Though this is yet another artist who doesnt seem to notice that Mila doesn't have solid red hair, but dyed black with red highlights...seems like nobody's familiar enough with her to actually remember that haha.
 
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